Redskin writing

Why I need Redskins!!!

Plan

• Explain why I deserve it
• Paragraphs
• How it would impact the classroom
• How it would make a better classroom
• Explain the feeling and what it's like to eat a Red Skin

I need Redskins, Why? because It will make me work hard at school. You know how I hate maths? If I have a couple of Redskins then I’ll be ready to work. My mind will be set and ready to race through the task set productively and focus entirely on the work. If I’m grumpy or sad and I don't want to do my work have a Redskin. The sugar will go through me and then i'll go back to my work in no time! If the classrooms noise level is too much for you to handle give everyone a Redskin. Everyone will immediately stop talking and the noise level will plummet. Every will be eating the lolly. No time for talking!

You know Mr Billings, what the taste of a Redskin is like. The sweet sensation slowy melting in your mouth and you just feel AMAZING! I know right now you'll surely be thinking of grabbing a Redskin! If you give us these you'll feel great about yourself. Giving that feeling to all your students. Just like helping poor homeless hungry kids.

 

We deserve Redskins because we work hard. Well…sometimes in class but definitely in music and tech. We work hard because we know that there will be an end reward. Such as in tech if you work hard you could end up with a delicious meal or some sort of creation. Entirely done with hard work and perseverance. That then pushes us to work hard to reach the reward.

 

Just think about the life you would have. A noise free classroom, a great feeling helping children and students that work productively and finish work to your standard!