Outdoor learning persuasive writing
I’m writing to you today to tell you why we should should invest some time and work into the space outside room 11. My reasoning and helpful comments hopely persuade you to revamp this space.
The space is dangerous. It has tiles poking up and someone is bound to trip over. There are odd nails and screws, I myself have stood on sharp stuff and it hurts.
When the ground is wet the ground tends to get slippery.The space is not a place where anyone would enjoy working. I think if you don’t do anything about it now then it’s just a waste of a potential working space.
This space doesn't catch your eye. The sheltered area and the old blue seat don’t make it enticing. The colours are plain and don’t make it pop. There are weeds popping out from everywhere. This space needs a makeover.
I think we could make this space a really cool learning space. We could grow some grass and add some plants. We could make it suitable for classes to be taught. Bean bags, chairs, tables, colour and hard work could make this project happen!
By Isabella
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