Inquiry unexplained creatures

This term our topic in inquiry is explaining the unexplained. Which means explaining in detail creature or legend that some people believe in and some don't eg. The lochness monster or bigfoot. I'm doing a legend about a road called Talamini. On that road some people have heard a mysterious moaning. Here is what i have write so far...

Weird NJ have done many articles on the moaning of Talamini road. People have reported hearing a mysterious moaning on Talamini road Bridgewater. Legend has it that maybe it could be a  ghost of a person who had been in a car crash. At this exact spot a little girl was said to be killed in a car accident. Her ghost is said to come out when people drive more than thirty five miles per hour. She warns you to slow down with a very faded moan. You have to listen very well to be able to hear it. But you would pretty silly to go that fast because the road is a very sharp corner! River drive Totowa is now known as “Annie’s road” named after the accident the happened to the little girl.

By Isabella