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Writing sample

Mr B gave us some pictures and we had to write about one of them. Here's mine...

Head under water

My fur was sopping wet and I was chilled to the bone but I didn’t seem to care. When at the beach no one cared! The fur of my back was rushing back as my feet took me else wear. In between my paws sand sneakily crept up until it rubbed saw but I didn't care a crashing wave of water would smash up against me and all worry’s were gone. Just enjoying the moment I smashed myself against wave after wave. All of a sudden there was a loud alarming siren it wasn’t till I looked up a swarms of people rushed past me. I didn’t know what to do…     

When I tried to paddle to shore the current wouldn't agree with me. I tried once more but gave up soon after. Now I was halfway out at sea. The panic rushed to his head. Pictures of his family flashed in his head. Questions of regret came into mind, ‘“why did I leave home” “Am I going to dye?”

The lamentable waves crashed into my head making me dizzy and nauseous. I was gulping down pockets of water at a time. My body was shutting down…

Nothing was remembered then by me don’t panic I’m not dead. I am now hear with my wonderful family. I am still grievous. It will probably take me awhile to get back to the beach from that ordeal experience but i’ll get there!

Innovation

Our inquiry topic this term is innovation. In groups we had 10 minutes to make a quick presentation. We had to explain what innovation is and some things about famous inventors. Heres Hollie, Lucian, Rebecca and mine...